The Apprentice Series 1: Under the Shadow of Darkness

Under the Shadow of Darkness  - James Cardona, Issa Cardona

I read James' story Santa Claus vs the Aliens and enjoyed it, especially after he fixed up the ending as I, and a few other reviewers, suggested, so when he asked me to take a look at this one, I was really excited. 

Bel has just become an apprentice to a great wizard, but had not had the chance to learn anything from him before they had to set off with two others (another wizard and his apprentice, a boy Bel had known in school) to find out the reason for the darkness that has swept over their lands and the zombie-esque creatures that are walking through that darkness.

I liked this story.  It was fun, interesting, and I really enjoyed the characters, especially the two wizards and their apprentices.  I liked the description of the darkness that covered everything and the adventure that they went on to try to save their lands from the evil that was taking over.  I liked the battle at the end, as well, and would really like to know more about these characters and their adventures to come, so I can't wait for book 2 to come out.

I did have one or two problems with the book.  First, it does have some editing issues, which I brought to the attention of the author.  Second, and the biggie for me, the dead - they are funny and, at times, even dumb, which makes them attacking not really all that frightening.  In fact, the only times that I had a fear of them was when they were first introduced (mainly because I did not know what they were capable of) and when they were attacking the town that these four stopped in for a few days to rest.  The other times, they seemed more like an annoying afterthought. 

Note: I received a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.

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